| Monday, October 6, 2008 |
| Lord of The Flies by William Golding #12 |
Chapter 12 - Cry of the Hunters
If Only. by Jack
Ralph thinks that he's better than me, huh? Well yeah right. I got everybody in my tribe, and how many in Ralph's? None! Nada. I'm better than him and my tribe is better! We dance and cheer and hunt for pigs. We all have a good time and I make living on this island much better. I've got Simon and Piggy murdered, and my next target is Ralph. Hah. He thinks he can run away from me, huh? Nope! My plan kind of worked. Ralph would go to Samneric to talk to them and I'd find out where Ralph is. But Samneric wouldn't tell me! I attempted to torture them, but I guess Ralph probably ran away in the jungle so I set it on fire to smoke him out. He tried to hide away from me. I guess he ran away from the ululation of our hunters scared him away. But anyways, I saw him and tried to fight him. As soon as we almost killed him, he hid away and a naval officer that had a white drill and epaulettes and he found us on the island and finally rescued us. I wanted to get rescued, but I mean, why now? Why couldn't we kill Ralph first? Ralph doesn't need to be rescued! We all can live without him, now can't we? I wanted to pull a diddle on him.. Aghh.. So that's the end of the power I gained on this island.. And we all left with distended stomaches.. |
posted by charisse @ 9:51 AM  |
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I like how you used what had happen and in a way turn it a little differently. I also like how you put stuff that we don't know if happened but we assume they happened.
Good job
Ben Stein
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Good use of words! I liked nada xD. Anyway, very descriptive and capturing. I liked the crazy way you described jack's personality! good job!
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Charisse::
I like how you really made it seem like you were in Jack's position. I also like how you were saying that Jack thought he lost all his power once they got rescued. And how he was wondering, "why now?!?" I really like it :]
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you did a good job of putting yourself in Jack's character. THe vocab words were used great. GOOOD JOB!!!
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It was a great blog. You really talked about Jacks emotions. I liked how Jack really was excited about Ralph being away. You also had a great use of words.
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I like how you used what had happen and in a way turn it a little differently. I also like how you put stuff that we don't know if happened but we assume they happened.
Good job
Ben Stein